::blinks:: Wow. That's some of the most coherent feedback I've ever gotten. Thank you!
Your dialogue sounds natural. This is the way people talk. I'm a complete dialogue whore, so you just made my day! ::beams::
in spite of the fact that you're highly irritated by people who don't seem to be able to distinguish RPS from real life, you don't let that discourage you from writing Dom/Elijah. Mph. They're just too damn pretty together. I can't stay away. ;)
I hope you don't mind me rec'ing this in my LJ? Not at all! And, again, many, many thanks! ::hugs::
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Date: 2003-06-18 04:01 pm (UTC)Your dialogue sounds natural. This is the way people talk.
I'm a complete dialogue whore, so you just made my day! ::beams::
in spite of the fact that you're highly irritated by people who don't seem to be able to distinguish RPS from real life, you don't let that discourage you from writing Dom/Elijah.
Mph. They're just too damn pretty together. I can't stay away. ;)
I hope you don't mind me rec'ing this in my LJ?
Not at all! And, again, many, many thanks! ::hugs::