How wonderful. I've always been a sucker for Domlijah. And GO ELIJAH! for not taking Orlando back. *Waves pompoms.* Never settle for being someone's back-up plan. (Dom's not back-up. He's just THERE. xP)
This was lovely, really. I loved the writing style, and how the flashbacks didn't interrupt the flow of the story (which they often tend to do). And the idea behind it, the explanation for why Elijah wasn't in Florida with them, and ...stuff. xD Nice job.
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Date: 2004-02-02 05:59 pm (UTC)This was lovely, really. I loved the writing style, and how the flashbacks didn't interrupt the flow of the story (which they often tend to do). And the idea behind it, the explanation for why Elijah wasn't in Florida with them, and ...stuff. xD Nice job.