It's fic like this that reminds me a) what good writing is like and b) why I thought you were a lot older. It's one of the best and most touching examples of show-not-tell that I've ever read. The emotion is hidden, but it's real and intense and made me all teary. Wow.
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timeasmymeasure
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Date: 2004-02-02 10:54 pm (UTC)