I liked that going back and forth from LA to NZ, from now to then. And that's the way it goes: sometimes you can bang your head against something really hard because you only see the stupid things you've done and said afterward. Maybe Elijah needed to go through this to understand Dom better. It only occurs to me now that I should also feel sorry for Orlando right? I mean, what he did wasn't any worse than what Elijah did; being inconsiderate of the other person's feelings.
When I read this:
"Orlando!" Elijah chirps. He's surprised at the warmth in his own voice.
I knew it was going to be alright, because in fanfic nothing much squicks me anymore, but Dom being hurt is a major squick of mine *blushing*
So yeah, perfect ending too, although Dom doesn't know it yet, heh.
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Date: 2004-02-05 12:19 am (UTC)I liked that going back and forth from LA to NZ, from now to then. And that's the way it goes: sometimes you can bang your head against something really hard because you only see the stupid things you've done and said afterward. Maybe Elijah needed to go through this to understand Dom better. It only occurs to me now that I should also feel sorry for Orlando right? I mean, what he did wasn't any worse than what Elijah did; being inconsiderate of the other person's feelings.
When I read this:
"Orlando!" Elijah chirps. He's surprised at the warmth in his own voice.
I knew it was going to be alright, because in fanfic nothing much squicks me anymore, but Dom being hurt is a major squick of mine *blushing*
So yeah, perfect ending too, although Dom doesn't know it yet, heh.
Good. Just so you know: I'm going to rec this.