yeah, i'm desperate.

[kaydeefalls]

I reiterate my begging for anyone willing to give my Two Lines fic a once-over. I don't really have anything to offer -- a reciprocal beta? I'm a decent beta. I know grammar and spelling and things. I willingly offer my services as beta to anyone who can look over my Two Lines fic and tell me it isn't crap. No nitpicking required; I've gone over it a number of times for technical errors. I just need someone to point out any holes/problems with the story itself.

Please?