Nice work, there! I love your choice of title ((: Momento Mori: Remember you must die goes SO well with the um, seed (for want of a better word) of the story: Bentley's death, but at the same time I absolutely love how you've tied it to their treasuring of life because of the death that they see. Which is essentially what that motto was for. And ALSO (again) I like the structure of it all, how you've chosen to end a story titled "Momento Mori" on an endnote of life and more importantly, being alive. And, and of course its very charming, what you've done with the dialogue and numbering the Dakins (:
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Date: 2008-08-09 02:16 pm (UTC)<3!
(and shouldn't I get round to getting an icon?)