Congratulations, you've just totally blown me away! This story is elegant at every level: structure, prose, emotion, and more. The Wizard of Oz technicolor metaphor was an inspired choice. Rose's path in her new life feels just right. The other characterizations are great too, particularly alt!Jack. I always adore the Bad Wolf, and you used it marvelously. I literally gasped aloud when Jack gave her the wolf pendant. (Yes, I really was that immersed in the story.) Much as part of me wants a real reunion kiss with the Doctor, the open ending really fits.
BTW, do you have any intention of posting this on A Teaspoon and An Open Mind (http://www.whofic.com/)? I've got a turn at recommending coming up soon on calufrax, but they want recs for fics that are up on Teaspoon.
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Date: 2008-10-26 08:19 am (UTC)BTW, do you have any intention of posting this on A Teaspoon and An Open Mind (http://www.whofic.com/)? I've got a turn at recommending coming up soon on