beta request

Well, I finished the Two Lines fic. I think I managed to fix the biggest problem with it, but I'm sure it could still use some tweaking. Of course, the challenge deadline is this Monday. So. Would anyone be willing to do a rather last-minute beta on this? It's a post-HBP fic, just under 6000 words, mainly Draco with a decent helping of Regulus Black and a side of Snape and Harry. No slash, because for some reason all of my Two Lines fics turn out to be gen. Well, I suppose if you turn it sideways and paint it purple and squint at it, you might catch a glimmer of slashiness, but...yeah.

Please? I realize that I haven't allowed much time for a proper beta, but I really don't want to post it without anyone else taking a look at it first.

yeah, i'm desperate.

I reiterate my begging for anyone willing to give my Two Lines fic a once-over. I don't really have anything to offer -- a reciprocal beta? I'm a decent beta. I know grammar and spelling and things. I willingly offer my services as beta to anyone who can look over my Two Lines fic and tell me it isn't crap. No nitpicking required; I've gone over it a number of times for technical errors. I just need someone to point out any holes/problems with the story itself.

Please?